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4th Grade Composing & Writing Process Practice Test 1



Multiple Choice
Identify the choice that best completes the statement or answers the question.
 
 
Acquire Skills for Revising a Draft
 

 1. 

The huge mountain began to crumble as the earth shook and I ran toward my car.
Which is another way to write this sentence?
a.
I ran toward the mountain crumbling as the earth shook.
c.
I ran toward my car as the earthquake caused a mountain to crumble.
b.
The crumbling mountain caused an earthquake as I ran toward my car.
d.
The crumbled mountain shook toward the running car.
 

 2. 

Which is best way to describe a flood destroying cabins?
a.
The gentle waters covered the banks of the river.
c.
The trickle of water passed by the cabins.
b.
The torrents of water rushed at the cabins ripping them apart.
d.
The water danced across the river in a playful swirl.
 
 
Main Idea & Writer’s Focus
 

 3. 

I looked forward to the last day of school because it meant the beginning of summer, and our family vacation.  We packed the car and headed toward the coast.  It would be a fun filled adventure looking for seashells and trying to spot wildlife.
Choose the best title for this passage.
a.
My Best School Year Ever
c.
My Vacation on the Coast
b.
The Best Day of My Life
d.
The Best Thanksgiving Holiday
 
 
Supporting Details
 

 4. 

You are writing a story for young children about their first trip to the zoo.
Which group of words is appropriate for your story?
a.
carnivores, animal rights, herbivores
c.
names of animals,  park train rides, feeding the animals
b.
trapping laws, international import laws,
d.
cost, food, bathroom location
 

 5. 

Start by getting out two eggs and breaking them into a bowl. __________ you will beat them with a whisk, or fork. Next add salt and pepper and pour into a frying pan. Cook them until they are done. ___________ place them in a plate and enjoy your scrambled eggs.
Choose the correctly ordered pair that best completes the paragraph.
a.
Then, First
c.
Later, Next
b.
Finally, First
d.
Then, Finally
 
 
Purpose, Format, Audience
 

 6. 

You are writing a sports story. You want it to show the excitement of the race. How would you best describe the events to make them sound exciting?
a.
It was a dark and cloudy day and the crowd mummered as they complained about the weather and looked at the exits as they thought of home.
c.
The bell rang as the gates burst open and the horses battled back and forth as the black horse lunged forward to win.
b.
The black horse ran the fastest.
d.
The black horse beat the brown horse to the finish line.
 

 7. 

Unless I study hard, _____________________________________________.
Select the best way to complete the above sentence.
a.
I won’t understand the principles of the math theory.
c.
because the principles of the math theory are hard to understand.
b.
understanding the principles of the math theory.
d.
the principles of the math theory are understanding.
 

 8. 

Which sentence is NOT a run-on?
a.
The weather was dreadful it rained all day.
c.
During our afternoon recess, the teacher gave us each a treat.
b.
Before dinner last night, I went to the store and I bought chicken and squash.
d.
The tree grew in our yard I climbed it every day one summer.
 

 9. 

Jill tripped and hurt herself.
Which is the best way to rewrite this sentence without changing the meaning?
a.
Jill stumbled on her way through the door and twisted her ankle.
c.
Jill hurt her ankle when Jerry pushed her.
b.
Jill felt sick and left the room.
d.
Jill broke her arm rollerblading.
 

 10. 

Which sentence has the best syntax?
a.
The most competitive of the soccer team were the members.
c.
Of the soccer team, the members were the most competitive.
b.
The most competitive members were of the soccer team.
d.
The members of the soccer team were the most competitive.
 

 11. 

Composing and Writing Process—Prewriting Skills—RIT 201-210
When would you use formal language in writing?
a.
recipe, thank you note, grocery list
c.
prescription, note card, outlines
b.
informational essay, research paper, business letter
d.
friendly letter, personal narrative, character sketch
 

 12. 

You are writing a paragraph about how to make chocolate chip cookies.
What form of writing would you use?
a.
informational essay
c.
narrative paragraph
b.
persuasive paragraph
d.
expository paragraph
 

 13. 

You broke a window with a baseball. From whose point of view would you tell about it?
a.
the owner of the house
c.
the neighbor who saw it
b.
your own
d.
your parents
 

 14. 

Read the following topics.
Paint brushes             Water colors
Art class                      Charcoal pencils
Pen and ink                 Easels
Which would be the main topic in on outline?
a.
Water colors
c.
Pen and ink
b.
Charcoal pencils
d.
Art class
 

 15. 

Composing and Writing Process—Use Editing and Proofreading Processes—RIT 201-210
Which sentence is punctuated correctly?
a.
I read “Box Step” in Frederick Barthclure’s short story collection, Moon Deluxe.
c.
Did you read “Elevator Man” in the “New Yorker”?
b.
I read the sports section in the “New York Times”.
d.
Did you see the article Hurricane in Time Magazine?
 

 16. 

Which letter closing is punctuated correctly?
a.
Later—
c.
Regrettably.
b.
See ya’ dude!
d.
Truly yours,
 

 17. 

Because she volunteered to make cookies Beth had to go to the store to buy ingredients.
After which word should you place a comma?
a.
cookies,
c.
Because,
b.
volunteered,
d.
store
 

 18. 

Which address is capitalized correctly?
A. Ms. Sylvia Smith, Chair
O.F.F. Incorporated
933 Livingston AVE.
Twin Falls, ID 82112
B. Mrs. Jenny Lewis, Director
Valley assisted Living
p.o. box 37
Beaver Creek, OR 97016
C. Guido Allende, Prop.
Guido’s Place
2731 west Placer st.
Longview, wa 98625

a.
Ms. Sylvia Smith, Chair
O.F.F. Incorporated
933 Livingston AVE.
Twin Falls, ID 82112
c.
Guido Allende, Prop.
Guido’s Place
2731 west Placer st.
Longview, wa 98625
b.
Mrs. Jenny Lewis, Director
Valley assisted Living
p.o. box 37
Beaver Creek, OR 97016
d.
Johnny West, Supervisor
Williams Machinery
97 Ninth St.
Detroit, MI 32126

 

 19. 

My friend who is a N.Y Yankees fan has tickets to the season’s opening game.
After which word or words should you place a comma?
a.
fan,
c.
friend, fan,
b.
tickets,
d.
who, fan,
 



 
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